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BEFORE

This summer in June I went on holiday in France for two weeks. I went to the concert of my favorite singer. I visited my family and my friends. I went to the see and the pool. In July I stayed Empuria. I went to the beach every day with a friend. I went with jet ski. To nights partying with friends. In August I have worked in a restaurant. And September I have only visited my family and my friends.

I decided to make Baxillerat because I took advanced studies to have a goog future. I feel with the ability to approve. Im am motivated.

AFTER

Dear teacher,

This summer in June I went on holiday to France for two weeks. I went to the concert of my favorite singer. I visited my visited my family and my friends. I went to the sea and the pool. 
In July I stayed in Empuriabrava. I went to the beach every day with a friend and I went with jet ski. At night, I went Sikim and Xiringuito with friends. I see fireworks with a friend. 
In August I worked in a restaurant.
And september I have only visited my family and friends.

I decided to study Batxillerat because I took advanced studies to have a good future. I feel I have to pass. Im am motivated.

Best wishes,
Maïtena Pragout.

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